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[–] qzx 0 points 2 points (+2|-0) ago 

You might want to define what a citizen is.

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[–] EB-0 0 points 0 points (+0|-0) ago 

I don't have much in the way of feedback other than to say I think this is a beautiful piece of our hobby. It feels real, it feels like it really was written by this nation. Keep up the good work and please continue to enjoy our subverse!

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[–] Truly 1 points 0 points (+1|-1) ago 

Missing a right to self-defense or weapon-keeping... not sure if firearms are in your world, but just an idea to add.

Also, amending the constitution seems a bit easier than most nations in the real world. Perhaps add a hint of direct democracy for amendments, or atleast local provinces weighing in. Overall I enjoyed reading it, good luck.

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[–] bfmv24 [S] 0 points 1 points (+1|-0) ago 

Thanks for the criticism, I never thought of that!