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[–] Doglegwarrior [S] ago 

Stating it was basicaly a rough draft. I just basicaly thought out loud and was open to critisim is bad? Tell me whats wrong dont just be an armchair kike faggot.

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[–] CinderBiter 1 point -1 points (+0|-1) ago 

First, don’t ever post a rough draft. Other people have to take time to read it. It’s pride of work & your name.

Secondly, there’s no ah-ha moment. A good rant has a cause and effect, a connection drawn that you normally wouldn’t. Another ah-ha is introduction of new information.

This post assumes the reader knows Jews are parasites or sports agents without any backing. You don’t think of where the listener is. In contrast you could write a post titled “Jews own sports.” Then lead the reader to the realization agents are all Jewish by citing all the instances where it occurs.

Your responses are all name calling & empty assumptions, there’s no (ah-ha) value to the reader.

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[–] Doglegwarrior [S] ago  (edited ago)

Good points. Ya a ton of people dont realize what the star system is and how jews created it and run it for many reasons all pretty fucking bad if you look into it. Ya i agree i just had my own personal mini aha moment tried banging it out on my phone and well you see the results not that good. Great points. Im not very good at getting my thoughts down on paper i can articulate them when talking to someone much better. Im gonna have to take some time think about it and put it together better. You points are taken and apprciated.