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[–] CinderBiter 1 point -1 points (+0|-1) ago  (edited ago)

Bud, your post was so rough and incoherent, I would have first argued it was to convince me that these ideas were conceived by someone devoid of any thought, trying to sway me to the conclusion that anyone who though this was retarded. But by your last comment you confirmed you’re just retarded.

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[–] Doglegwarrior [S] ago 

Stating it was basicaly a rough draft. I just basicaly thought out loud and was open to critisim is bad? Tell me whats wrong dont just be an armchair kike faggot.

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[–] CinderBiter 1 point -1 points (+0|-1) ago 

First, don’t ever post a rough draft. Other people have to take time to read it. It’s pride of work & your name.

Secondly, there’s no ah-ha moment. A good rant has a cause and effect, a connection drawn that you normally wouldn’t. Another ah-ha is introduction of new information.

This post assumes the reader knows Jews are parasites or sports agents without any backing. You don’t think of where the listener is. In contrast you could write a post titled “Jews own sports.” Then lead the reader to the realization agents are all Jewish by citing all the instances where it occurs.

Your responses are all name calling & empty assumptions, there’s no (ah-ha) value to the reader.