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[–] TheAntiZealot ago  (edited ago)

It is an improvement.

Might I recommend that you make the red & green text white, except for the specific words "these" and "those."

You can leave the blue and yellow as-is. The yellow being especially functional. While the blue is open to debate.

Now this may be nitpicking, but if the white box (and corresponding "to those") were a unique color that would be the final edit.

Even a child would understand it the first time with these changes.


[–] Caesarkid1 [S] ago 

Where were you five hours ago? Now it will have to wait until I'm conscious.


[–] TheAntiZealot 0 points 1 point (+1|-0) ago 

Eh, such is life.