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[–] Hawk 0 points 1 point (+1|-0) ago 

A small critique if i may. "At the minute" is a little jarring. Perhaps you could use the phrase 'at the moment' instead? It will read better. Also, you need not use so many commas. Best of luck in your blogging, No offence intended. Cheers.

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[–] thoughts-from-alex [S] 0 points 1 point (+1|-0) ago 

Fair enough! I'll take it into consideration, cheers.