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[–] MartyMcFly1985 0 points 1 points (+1|-0) ago 

Have you decided to tweak the material or delivery? If so, in what way?

I ask because I'm interested in what it has taught you to move forward.

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[–] malandric [S] 0 points 2 points (+2|-0) ago 

I took away that some of my jokes can be built up for too long. If it takes more than 40 seconds to build up the joke might not hit, but if I sprinkle small jokes in the build up it keeps the momentum going.

My material may be too personal to be relatable. My suicide bit wasn't as good out loud as on paper.

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[–] MartyMcFly1985 0 points 0 points (+0|-0) ago 

Interesting, thanks. I have a great sense of humor but my delivery needs a lot of work. I often think if I could have a skilled comedian deliver jokes i've written they'd go over well, so I appreciate the peek into your development process.