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[–] VieBleu 0 points 3 points (+3|-0) ago  (edited ago)

This look like it took a lot of work. Thank you for your dedication.

Friendly editing suggestion - On your map, there is this text attached "Here is a map I have created showing where the underground tunnels in D.C. currently lead today. The google map indicators show Comet Ping Pong, the "Pegasus Museum" and 4082 Chesapeake st."

The first sentence does not read well. "I have created this map that shows where the underground tunnels in DC lead to and join with one another, as of today (give date)."

When I read it the first time, and I read a lot and often and well, even to me it sounded awkward and I read "lead" as the metal element. Just want your message to be crystal clear.

I would also spell out the red lines as in "The red lines indicate the tunnels, the white lines are surface streets."