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[–] DungeonMaster ago 

The party of adventurers stood back to back in a small circle, looking out at the mysterious surroundings. A second earlier, they were in a dark and mysterious cave, but now are in a magical land that extends as far as the eye can see in all directions. Getting fed up with the situation, and full of impatience, the barbarian charges away from the group with a bloodcurdling warcry. He immediately feels a sharp pain in his shin, and goes flying forwards through the air, landing with a loud thud. He angrily stands up and swings his war-hammer at the invisible attack, but as the arc swings high overhead, it smashes into another invisible entity, stopping short with a deafening smash. Putting two and two together, the wise old wizard gets an idea. He cast a spell, throwing a spray of colorful goo across the mysterious habitat. "Well, would you look at that." said the handsome rogue. "Seems like our barbarian friend is having a quarrel with the furniture."

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[–] mondogecko 1 point -1 points (+0|-1) ago 

Lose the adverbs.