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[–] AR47 3 points -3 points (+0|-3) ago 

Well too me it is the lack of creative writting that bugs me. I get there was an attempt which is good, but wow can't you proof read some shit?

Punctuation and spelling errors aside which will happen anyways.

When people write like this it isn't quality it is basement notebook musing found during a raid for a serial killer. Not saying it needs to be so good it can be published, but just read over it and say......yeah sounds like the ramblings of some murder that hasn't taken pills for a while.

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[–] Lateknighttt [S] 0 points 6 points (+6|-0) ago 

You are made of wet shadows little man.

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[–] AR47 1 point 0 points (+1|-1) ago 

A wet shadow?

Ok that is a start. It Sparks some wonder about it's meaning.

Go ahead and elaborate for me.

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[–] 15215435? 0 points 4 points (+4|-0) ago 

The errors in the grammar and punction is part of the art, you have to read between the lines my friend.

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[–] Farfalle_Man 0 points 2 points (+2|-0) ago 

As murky and intangible as it is, the schizo post is as close as we can come to truly communicating with one another in these rotting prisons. I cannot imagine the darkness of a life without even that. We are fighting for you brother, and if you cannot be saved then for the promise that no more will go through the same anguish.