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[–] qawsed 1 point -1 points (+0|-1) ago 

It isn't just one break. Even your last sentence, "thanks i've given it away lol" reads more like a text message than it does a cleverly-constructed-but-purposefully-grammatically-incorrect style choice.

Learn to write well before you try to be unique.

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[–] SaneGoatiSwear [S] ago  (edited ago)

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[–] qawsed 1 point -1 points (+0|-1) ago 

Learn to take criticism, buddy.