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[–] qawsed 1 point 0 points (+1|-1) ago 

Before you break the rules, you need to learn them.

You're ignoring capitalization, comma splices, punctuation, and many other conventions. It's clear that you're lazy, ignorant, or just sloppy, which you're attempting to justify as artistic expression. To do so, you have to consciously choose to do so, rather than do so out of incompetence. Look at Picasso's early work - his pink and blue periods include incredibly realistic paintings - and he did all of that before becoming the abstract painter that we all know. You, on the other hand, just can't be bothered to write well.

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[–] SaneGoatiSwear [S] ago  (edited ago)

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[–] qawsed 1 point -1 points (+0|-1) ago  (edited ago)

It would still be better if you capitalized properly.

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[–] qawsed 1 point -1 points (+0|-1) ago 

There's no underlying artistic merit to your work. It's painful to read and has negligible payoff. You'd vastly improve the quality of your writing with a modicum of effort, but you're going to stubbornly refuse to do so.

It's like college students who don't re-read their papers and try to justify it by claiming that a first draft is "fresher" than one that's been proof read. But hey, go ahead and prove me wrong. Produce a few simple paragraphs of classically well-written prose and I'll apologize and praise your talents to the world.