[–] boredTech 0 points 5 points (+5|-0) ago 

The situation is made worse when a blizzard crashes upon the keep trapping Kara

keep, trapping < , , , ,,,,,,,,,,

I expect you didn't have a proof reader.


Giving you shit. My wife used to roll out her own books.

[–] ZazLiquidwater [S] 0 points 3 points (+3|-0) ago  (edited ago)

hahaha, it's unreal how many little mistakes your eyes end up gazing over

[–] cursedcrusader 0 points 1 points (+1|-0) ago 

Will check it out. Thanks.

[–] ZazLiquidwater [S] 0 points 0 points (+0|-0) ago 

Cool, hope you enjoy it