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[–] Kleyno 0 points 3 points (+3|-0) ago 

Very good, but I feel if you changed the last word from "us" to "me", it would have more emotional impact. :)

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[–] NotAnUndercoverCop 0 points 4 points (+4|-0) ago 

Lisa, Lisa, I thought you loved me... looooved meeeeee.