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[–] 19200470? 0 points 2 points (+2|-0) ago 

"It would be a powerful "Vote if No Confidence"" should be "Vote of No Confidence", and "of the citizens id doing so" should be "of the citizens if doing so". This makes me quite pedantic and uncomfortable as I'm sure my ability to write such a good script is lacking as well as my criticisms detracting from a good message.

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[–] 19201558? ago 

I didn't bother reading it in full after seeing enough typos. Thanks for the extra pair of eyes.