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[–] ChiefBromden 0 points 1 points (+1|-0) ago 

Hey Marcel!

The composition adheres to a pretty good rule of 3rds. The crop is pretty close in there and there isn't much context surrounding it. Why is he....she? crying? The aspect ratio seems off but it could be because it just looks 'long' . Reading the description I now see it's your granddaughter. It mentions taken with a cell phone, which while that sometimes detracts and is noticeable, I don't find it noticeable at all. The BW processing is good and there doesn't seem to be that much retouching, which is good.

Subjectively, It's a great Snapchat/cell phone type shot that would be much better if we had some more context, either in this photo or if you put it in a set with other photos that gave some more context. I see this as a refined 'snapchat' type story and this is like...the 3rd photo in the series.

Cheers!
-Rob

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[–] Shawnski 0 points 1 points (+1|-0) ago 

I agree with Rob on this one. The photo itself is fairly well composed, but it could be a bit better with more context even if some of it is blurred in the depth of field.