[–] AnalogRocks 0 points 1 points (+1|-0) ago 

It's definitely a nice moment you captured. The light isn't very appealing though which is what really detracts from the photo. As an example here's a photo with a similar cute moment, but notice that the light in the photo is amazing which is part of what makes it so good.

This isn't something you can control if you're just walking around without any gear other than your camera though, so I'd say it's about as good a photo as you could get with lighting like that without some sort of external lights.

I also wish I could see all of both of them, and that it was shot from lower (like down on their eye level).

Don't let my critique discourage you though! You captured a nice moment between them and I'm sure they'd love to see the photo (if they haven't already). Keep up the good work!