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[–] mdmason 0 points 1 points (+1|-0) ago 

Awesome concept! You get the feeling that she is looking towards the future.

I think I would have tried to balance out the image by having the brides left hand/arm showing to the same degree that the right hand/arm are, her left side seems a bit cut off. I think I would also have lightened up the shadows on the curtain a bit, you can see some detail near the edges however if that area was lightened up so that the curtain pattern and folds showed a bit more it would give more depth to the image.

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[–] AnalogRocks 0 points 1 points (+1|-0) ago 

It's a great shot! I'd be extremely happy if I was the bride :)

Also I don't think it'd be very hard to photoshop that couch out!

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[–] toohotformariokart 0 points 0 points (+0|-0) ago 

or crop.

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[–] computersaysno [S] 0 points 0 points (+0|-0) ago 

brilliant thank you for the feedback too. Unfortunately I couldn't move that and the only window light I had was there.

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[–] fourwordslash 0 points 0 points (+0|-0) ago 

Why not bring this to photoshop and use a flipped duplicate of the right side to cover up the left couch?

I would also work on lens correction to straighten out the window a little more. I think what's putting me off is that the lines between the panels are very straight and perpendicular, but the walls around the window are curved in an awkward way (the right one being more curved than the left). I also think if you saturate the red of the curtains a little more you could really up your complimentary color game.

Overall, though, this is a great shot!

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[–] Metalhammer 0 points 0 points (+0|-0) ago 

Looks good to me. I would be nitpicky about the one-point being perfect. But that's only because I shoot buildings everyday.