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[–] DetectiveSplat 0 points 2 points (+2|-0) ago 

I dig it but your voice doesn't sit right in the mix. I can hear the space you record in. If that's a reverb effect you should probably choose a different one.

It sounds like you quantise a lot of your melody devices as well. Play around with a little bit of swing and add some offset so you aren't on dead on the beat as it makes it a bit monotonous. You dance around the beat well with your rhymes, try and edge your rhythm as well. 8 bar fills do this real well. Talib Kwalli and MF Doom are very good at this.

Like I said mate, I dig it. The production is pretty good. Your flow is good.

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[–] CIDEEFFECT [S] 0 points 1 points (+1|-0) ago 

thank you very much i appreciate the feedback

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[–] DetectiveSplat 0 points 0 points (+0|-0) ago