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[–] DetectiveSplat 0 points 2 points (+2|-0) ago 

I dig it but your voice doesn't sit right in the mix. I can hear the space you record in. If that's a reverb effect you should probably choose a different one.

It sounds like you quantise a lot of your melody devices as well. Play around with a little bit of swing and add some offset so you aren't on dead on the beat as it makes it a bit monotonous. You dance around the beat well with your rhymes, try and edge your rhythm as well. 8 bar fills do this real well. Talib Kwalli and MF Doom are very good at this.

Like I said mate, I dig it. The production is pretty good. Your flow is good.

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[–] CIDEEFFECT [S] 0 points 1 points (+1|-0) ago 

thank you very much i appreciate the feedback

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[–] DetectiveSplat 0 points 0 points (+0|-0) ago 

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[–] JohnAZoidberg 0 points 0 points (+0|-0) ago 

i dig this. I would like a chance to mix down "Listen To My Music" I dig your style, you've got some talent, but still a bit rough.

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[–] CIDEEFFECT [S] 0 points 0 points (+0|-0) ago 

DL link https://soundcloud.com/cide-effect/listen-to-my-music-prod-by-uncle-sam. if you think you can mix it go a head 8D. thank you for listening.

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[–] JohnAZoidberg 0 points 0 points (+0|-0) ago 

I can do a little with mastering the whole track, but i'd like to get the multis... at least the beat and the vocals seperated. :D

I like doing things proper.

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[–] j_ 0 points 0 points (+0|-0) ago 

Why should I listen to your music?

I’m serious, give us a reason instead of posting a clickbait title.

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[–] CIDEEFFECT [S] 0 points 1 points (+1|-0) ago 

because a painter can post a picture of their art, i write music, so i posted it.

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[–] j_ 0 points 1 points (+1|-0) ago 

Oh, I’m not disputing your right to post your music. Post away! I asked why I should listen to it.