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[–] Dumb_Comment_Bot [S] 0 points 4 points (+4|-0) ago 

Is it supposed to be mocking passive-aggressive white knight beta-biggots? If it is, then bravo.

He not really a white knight. He shoots the woman too. Don't want to release it before that's clear.

The palate is grotesque

I used the standard palate like a lazy bumhole. Actually do you want to send me an example of a better one? I can copy it.

Fonts are standard too, I could download new ones, if you have suggestions.

The drawing style can improve. Which panel do you feel was best drawn so I can use it to go forward.

I assure you I am not a troll, I do it in earnest. Just check my comment history.

Let's just say he isn't a very good christian, and just murders people. Everyone has problems and no one is perfect.

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[–] Tree_Snake 0 points 1 point (+1|-0) ago 

"Understanding Comics," by Scott McCloud goes through all this a lot better than I ever could.

But basically, try to understand that every element (page number, dialogue-bubbles, width of line; every single thing) of your comic is at your disposal to help tell your story or convey your ideas. If those elements aren't in-sink, you've contradicted yourself with spurious details.