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[–] 18483078? ago 

I've haven't read Siege myself (been on my to-do list), but I'm an avid fan of the Turner Diaries. The few flaws of the book are vastly outweighed by the overall vision and subtle ideological points that Dr. William Luther Pierce makes. Masonites seem a bit more kooky than followers of Dr. Pierce, but then again, Mason was into more kooky stuff, while Pierce got a PhD in physics.

I personally advocate the creation of an online database of short stories along the lines of the Turner Diaries and Siege. I have written a few such short stories, and I plan on setting up a website soon, somewhere on the Dark Net, to post these sort of stories and to encourage others to write them.

Anywhere, here are a few very, very short stories you may enjoy.

https://pastebin.com/TgbJ8etx

https://pastebin.com/7nuMgAr2

https://pastebin.com/yBwy5g1z

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[–] 18702338? ago 

man I want to be honest with you, and I will. I couldnt get through even the first story for one main reason: its much too didactic and feels not at all like a story- but rather an explanation. In a story, you want to show the reader how it is, not explain it to them. That was it doesnt lose its touch, and the reader feels as if he is experiencing something new for the first time. grammar is fine but use of vocab is lacking. From your post you came off as a 30-yo man, but by your writing it appeared as though it was a high school student.regardless, I think the idea is still there with you, and you could make something great of it. Good luck mate.

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[–] 18483082? ago 

If you do the website, let me know