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1 submissions to ShortStories

1 submissions to WritingAdvice

This user has so far shared a total of 0 links, started a total of 2 discussions and submitted a total of 14 comments.

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5 highest rated submissions:

Jonah Krane - The Eager Knight[Chapter 1], submitted: 6/28/2015 11:06:42 PM, 4 points (+4|-0)

Jonah Krane - The Eager Knight[Chapter 1], submitted: 6/28/2015 11:03:26 PM, 2 points (+2|-0)

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Jonah Krane - The Eager Knight[Chapter 1], submitted: 6/28/2015 11:03:26 PM, 2 points (+2|-0)

Jonah Krane - The Eager Knight[Chapter 1], submitted: 6/28/2015 11:06:42 PM, 4 points (+4|-0)

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3 highest rated comments:

Jonah Krane - The Eager Knight[Chapter 1] submitted by TigerWrite to WritingAdvice

TigerWrite 0 points 1 points (+1|-0) ago

No sorry, I never recieved that PM. The naive personality of Jonah is key, and will do him some good and bad. That is deliberate.

This is a story of a (currently) 13 year old, I doubt I need to delve that much in to that until later, maybe what his pipedream is and how it's currently is out of reach.

Yes, formatting is a big issue I agree, my own document look's better, haha!

Research, research and more research. Thank you so much of it, I will keep that in mind, the "idea" is broad and when I wrote it I did not have a sort of "guild/house-crest" thing in mind, interesting idea however.

I have also decided to make this more of a shortstory rather than a full-blown novel. Which is why I am at time deliberatly vague. Thank you! =)

Jonah Krane - The Eager Knight[Chapter 1] submitted by TigerWrite to ShortStories

TigerWrite 0 points 1 points (+1|-0) ago

I'm glad I was right in that regard. I agree with the being poor equals no full ringmail-armor, but I think in that sentence it would make sense to use ringmail rather than cloth. I also write that his father works in the Night Guard, which does have ringmail, but I have not actually told you(anyone) this information. ;)

Thank you for your kind words, I agree with the putting the words down. I pretty much always have ideas in my head, the issue is getting them down propely. Usually the ideas I have are broad, so the details come later in hindsight.

Jonah Krane - The Eager Knight[Chapter 1] submitted by TigerWrite to ShortStories

TigerWrite 0 points 1 points (+1|-0) ago

Actually. One of Jonah's "things" will be in the future that he has not been in a proper duel with ringmail and swords of steel. This will be expanded upon naturally. :) I might restructure the whole text so it fits together better, but we'll see. Thank you! =)

3 lowest rated comments:

Jonah Krane - The Eager Knight[Chapter 1] submitted by TigerWrite to WritingAdvice

TigerWrite 0 points 0 points (+0|-0) ago

Not a problem. Thank you. =)

Jonah Krane - The Eager Knight[Chapter 1] submitted by TigerWrite to WritingAdvice

TigerWrite 0 points 0 points (+0|-0) ago

Big update. Feedback is always appreicated. Thankyou!

Jonah Krane - The Eager Knight[Chapter 1] submitted by TigerWrite to WritingAdvice

TigerWrite 0 points 0 points (+0|-0) ago

Updated. Spelling, a bit of depth added.