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[–] omegletrollz ago 

Let me take a chance at making stanzas out of this cool poem. Sorry for intruding but maybe seeing how easy it is will push you into doing that next time - it adds a lot to the poem as far rhythm is concerned, and even meaning to a lesser extent!

There's beauty in the midnight sun
For those who walk or would rather run.
Preferring darkness when the day is done.

The third shift, gravyard workers
These pale, pasty night lurkers.
But there's others still
Who simply enjoy the night time thrill.
Those who love the adventure of night
Navigating their path by moonlight.

How can you resist such a feeling
When darkness send**s** your mind reeling.
Seeing shapes in shadows
And hearing unknown sounds.
Is that an animal I hear?
I hope it remains unfound.

But I'm drawn to this inky black
It beckons with it's tendrils of low mist.
It's clear that I could never go back.

Also using periods (punctuation) is very uncommon on poetry and I don't think it's adding any value here.

Also if you wanna see some more talk of darkness and fascination go for a deep dive here https://www.voat.co/v/ShortPoems/comments/893404/4466865

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[–] omegletrollz 0 points 2 points (+2|-0) ago 

Fo' realz!