[–] qawsed 1 point -1 points 0 points (+0|-1) ago
It isn't just one break. Even your last sentence, "thanks i've given it away lol" reads more like a text message than it does a cleverly-constructed-but-purposefully-grammatically-incorrect style choice.
Learn to write well before you try to be unique.
[–] SaneGoatiSwear [S] ago (edited ago)
[–] qawsed 1 point -1 points 0 points (+0|-1) ago
Learn to take criticism, buddy.