[–] [deleted] ago
[–] qawsed 1 point -1 points 0 points (+0|-1) ago
There's no underlying artistic merit to your work. It's painful to read and has negligible payoff. You'd vastly improve the quality of your writing with a modicum of effort, but you're going to stubbornly refuse to do so.
It's like college students who don't re-read their papers and try to justify it by claiming that a first draft is "fresher" than one that's been proof read. But hey, go ahead and prove me wrong. Produce a few simple paragraphs of classically well-written prose and I'll apologize and praise your talents to the world.
[–] SaneGoatiSwear [S] ago (edited ago)
[–] qawsed 1 point -1 points 0 points (+0|-1) ago (edited ago)
It would still be better if you capitalized properly.
[–] SaneGoatiSwear [S] ago (edited ago)