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[–] SaneGoatiSwear [S] ago  (edited ago)

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[–] qawsed 1 point -1 points (+0|-1) ago  (edited ago)

It would still be better if you capitalized properly.

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[–] SaneGoatiSwear [S] ago  (edited ago)

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[–] qawsed 1 point -1 points (+0|-1) ago 

There's no underlying artistic merit to your work. It's painful to read and has negligible payoff. You'd vastly improve the quality of your writing with a modicum of effort, but you're going to stubbornly refuse to do so.

It's like college students who don't re-read their papers and try to justify it by claiming that a first draft is "fresher" than one that's been proof read. But hey, go ahead and prove me wrong. Produce a few simple paragraphs of classically well-written prose and I'll apologize and praise your talents to the world.

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[–] SaneGoatiSwear [S] ago  (edited ago)