Pat I would like to buy a synonym for 1,000,000 bucks.
If this is an original content piece I can help you, but might take a while as you repeat the same thing over and over, but more people should learn to captivate the reader.
Well too me it is the lack of creative writting that bugs me. I get there was an attempt which is good, but wow can't you proof read some shit?
Punctuation and spelling errors aside which will happen anyways.
When people write like this it isn't quality it is basement notebook musing found during a raid for a serial killer. Not saying it needs to be so good it can be published, but just read over it and say......yeah sounds like the ramblings of some murder that hasn't taken pills for a while.