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[–] bopper [S] ago 

Great story about the milk, very rare too. Guess who added the part in the article about "I don't drink milk"? Dr. Group, the hippie. He's been hanging around Austin too much w/ Alex I think, a way cool town you see ... originally he's from Houston. The taste of raw milk does indeed vary according to pasture and even from cow to cow. Local dairy here tells us which cow to pick. We are told as writers (though I am semi-retired from writing, the internet cheapened the labor market), to shoot for eighth grade level, and write like you talk. Avoid overly proper grammar.

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[–] 2impendingdoom 1 point -1 points (+0|-1) ago 

Do you think my grammer is overly proper? I don't think I have ever heard that complaint before.

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[–] bopper [S] ago  (edited ago)

You're a naturally good writer. You know the rules well enough, and you break them properly. Edit: I wasn't targeting you when I mentioned overly proper, sorry. Was just stating what we were told, how to write.