Well yeah, Saxons don't exist anymore, but my point was it still resonates strongly in its original form. It's a historical artefact. Your version says more about your feelings sure, but Rudyard's original is transcendent because it's so old, and talks of events even older.
But unika animals shitskins rob you, use up taxes, destroys property. They are more like vermins and you would hate a hog that destroyed your garden, right?
[–] CuriousOnlooker 0 points 7 points 7 points (+7|-0) ago
It works just fine with the Saxon. Don't butcher Kipling.
[–] TexasVet [S] 1 point 3 points 4 points (+4|-1) ago
I am not a Saxon and I have begun to hate.
[–] CuriousOnlooker 0 points 5 points 5 points (+5|-0) ago (edited ago)
Well yeah, Saxons don't exist anymore, but my point was it still resonates strongly in its original form. It's a historical artefact. Your version says more about your feelings sure, but Rudyard's original is transcendent because it's so old, and talks of events even older.
[–] VoaterFraud 0 points 1 point 1 point (+1|-0) ago
At least credit the original author. Some folks wouldn't know you altered a classic Kipling poem.
[–] In_Liberty ago (edited ago)
The original Kipling poem used the term "English" IIRC