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[–] Faustian 0 points 3 points (+3|-0) ago  (edited ago)

The Dark Lord is back, eh? I have missed your poetry. Very gritty - the grind of working for a dirty dollar bill? Capitalism? Father figures... so many tropes. So many options. This is a beautiful piece.

Edit... one of my favorite small subs is v/shortpoems - check it out.

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[–] dhisum_dhisum [S] 0 points 2 points (+2|-0) ago 

Thank you dear!

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[–] Faustian 0 points 2 points (+2|-0) ago 

<3

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[–] dhisum_dhisum [S] 0 points 2 points (+2|-0) ago 

I have had bad experiences posting to Poetry-specific forums in the past. So i stay away from them, I will try and post one of mine in ShortPoems and will go by the ear :)

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[–] Faustian 0 points 2 points (+2|-0) ago 

I have a feeling that you will really like it. :-)