[–] Hawk 0 points 1 point 1 point (+1|-0) 4.6 years ago
A small critique if i may. "At the minute" is a little jarring. Perhaps you could use the phrase 'at the moment' instead? It will read better. Also, you need not use so many commas. Best of luck in your blogging, No offence intended. Cheers.
[–] thoughts-from-alex [S] 0 points 1 point 1 point (+1|-0) 4.6 years ago
Fair enough! I'll take it into consideration, cheers.
[–] Hawk 0 points 1 point 1 point (+1|-0) ago
A small critique if i may. "At the minute" is a little jarring. Perhaps you could use the phrase 'at the moment' instead? It will read better. Also, you need not use so many commas. Best of luck in your blogging, No offence intended. Cheers.
[–] thoughts-from-alex [S] 0 points 1 point 1 point (+1|-0) ago
Fair enough! I'll take it into consideration, cheers.